That is great. The flock of birds, and her pose. When I try to read this photo I can only come to the conclusion that she put a picture of that bird on the wall using her hammer.
I love the concept of this piece!! I have to disagree with you; I don't think the bird looks awful, it may just need to be incorporated into the piece a little better. Right now, the balance feels somewhat off; the flock of birds versus the single large bird on the other side of the figure.
Hope you don't mind my critique.
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I would add a wire and a nail to the hanging frame (if that's what your intent is) and up or down the values in the "print" just slightly to give just a little more identity.
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How did you do this? What is real - what digital?
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so so so !!!!!
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Moving things - Fascinate me
Hope you don't mind my critique.
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Welcome to Neverland
Otherwise, great work.
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